Lucky You It’s Haiku 1

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Last Week’s KSP Writer’s Centre assignment was a haiku poem and lucky you I have 4 to share.  LOL  Enjoy my very first Haiku attempt.

Frost in the meadow

The sun fights clouds but loses

The blighted field dies

Please be kind but critique.

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16 thoughts on “Lucky You It’s Haiku 1

  1. The lady at KSP said its a Japanese style poem the rules are 5 syllables, then 7 then 5. Traditionally the subject is nature and it should involve contrasts. But none of us were 100% sure on any of this. Thanks for reading!

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    1. Oh no I have to tell you there will be only 3 more haiku… whats the plural? I’m going with haikuzels because it’s my blog. Mainly I write rubbish! And if you are feeling that perhaps you have found a potential protege, than I accept I have just been to your blog & I think you may be a genius. But be aware despite my writing and sense of humour I am not actually a small child, I just think like one. Oh & I get even sillier when I am sleepy (it’s after midnight where I am)(While I’m writing not where you are reading although it may be). If this hasn’t scared you, Hurrah!

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      1. Noo! I saw some of your other work, including the How I Started to Write and thought it was awesome!! 😀 Haha that’s funny! It’s lunch time over where we live! And thank you again!! Can’t wait to see what you come up with next (especially the haikuzels) hahaha!

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